I serve all those baffled souls.
Staying witness en this route,
Let me warn you once or more.
Path is set in thorny floors.
Take that path and you reach home,
Daring all that comes on way.
As an when you approach there,
Things are more that you will note.
Let me warn you once or more.
Route that brought you until here,
Splits in two and takes you home.
Roads are not as plain as past;
Careful when you take your step.
Having traveled miles at ease,
This might look that simple too.
In your quest for perennial light,
Things are more that you must know.
One that lines up straight ahead,
Offers best of things in life.
Lit up bright in golden glow;
Path is paved with softest stones.
Take that path and you reach home,
Walking through a deluxe route.
As and when you approach there,
Things are more that you will note.
A light which led you all that while,
Dims off gradual as you move.
The floor that caressed both your foot,
Transforms solid step by step.
As you reach your destined place,
You see no more light in there.
Should you settle with that life,
Reigned by herds of darker mind?
Now this road that deviates off,
Offers worst of things in life.
Dark as murky moonless night;
Take that path and you reach home,
Daring all that comes on way.
As an when you approach there,
Things are more that you will note.
A path that scares you with it's gloom,
Lights up with your inner light.
Soles that pained on rugged floor,
Transform tougher step by step.
As you reach your destined place,
You see no more darkness there.
Should you settle with that life,
Shining bright as dome of light?
On this tortuous lane of life,
I serve all those baffled souls.
Staying witness all this while,
Let me warn you once or more.
I serve all those baffled souls.
Staying witness all this while,
Let me warn you once or more.
Route that brought you until here,
Splits in two and takes you home.
Roads are not as plain as past;
Careful when you take your step.
Having traveled miles at ease,
This might look that simple too.
In your quest for perennial light,
Things are more that you must know.
Wow!!! Loved it.... Life is all about the choices we make and it has been beautifully portrayed here... Thank you friend!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Nisha.
DeleteIf only the choices where easy to make
ReplyDeleteexcellent and beautifully crafted lines!
Thank you Red.
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DeleteDaring all that comes on way.
ReplyDeletein the second paragraph made it sound sweet like
Else, the poem was very good.
Thank you Divenita.
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Deletefinding oneself always at the square and deciding which way to go..maybe that is what makes life interesting...very well written :)
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DeleteFirst of all, welcome back to the blogging world, Leo. :)
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Thank you Akshay.
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Thank you Saru.
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DeleteAhh! choices! These lines run deep, doc.
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Thank you D.Nambiar.
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Deletechoices choices choices .. and then to decide on which one to take
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Thank you Bikramjit.
DeleteIt's all about one's choice, isn't it? I'd say, "Beautiful!"
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Thank you alka.
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DeleteLife is about Change, Choices & Experiences; we need acceptance & courage to go through it.
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Thank you jayadevm.
DeleteRoute that brought you until here,
ReplyDeleteSplits in two and takes you home.
Roads are not as plain as past;
Careful when you take your step.
Awesome stanza...and a very beautiful poem...
Thank you Sri Valli.
DeleteLovely...Mostly tough decisions prove to be the best decisions in the end. Your poem describes it the best :)
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