Another amateur attempt at poetry. Looking forward for your feedback so that I can improve upon it.
Lambent in a glorious might,
I see light at the farther east.
Life so obscure all this while,
I kept dodging, blind as bat,
Craving for the light to shine.
With no strength left to try,
And it failed to come to end,
It was faith that I would lose.
Now that things are easing off,
Facing light at the father east,
I thank thee with all my life.
Picture courtesy : Lion King
Faith matters:-)don't lose
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it isn't dark...means light is here...guess the dimmer needs to be done away with
ReplyDeleteI love this poem. Everything about it is right!
ReplyDeleteLet everyone have their ray of hope in darkness to guide them.
True, we all want to hang on to our rays of hope. One suggestion to make your blog look neater, put the Followers and tweets in the sidebar and let the title and header be clutter free.
ReplyDeletewonderful write. Thanks for sharing. Yes we live by hope. You have a different style. I will try sometime. You might wish to read few of my work in case you get the time @ (http://iamdirtyineedwashing.blogspot.in) though i am still learning :)
ReplyDeletebeautifully written leo :)
ReplyDeleteDee..
a fine write
ReplyDeleteNicely written :)
ReplyDeleteoh a poem!
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hope matters
faith is something that keeps the hope alive I guess .. and great are the people who donot lose hope
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very flamboyant post :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a nice poem :).
ReplyDeleteEveryone will see the Ray Of Hope some time ;).
Hope - It gives the strength to move on, especially in troubled times...
ReplyDeleteVery well-written Leo!
It is always the darkest before dawn.
ReplyDeletewell doc really well written... small , sweet and profound ..and of cos Simba cheered me up as always ... :)
ReplyDeletenice poem...well written...
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do not lose hope...keep the faith alive..one day you will surely succeed!!!
ReplyDeletenicely written...loved it... :)
ReplyDeleteMy first visit to your page. and.... i am impressed.... :) excellent... ;) thank you for the words... :) loved the pic too... :-P
ReplyDeleteBeautifully crafted emotions. Loved it. :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome... Short, sweet and emotion filled... :)
ReplyDeleteloved the flow.. it's beautiful!
ReplyDeleteLooking East brings a new daylight each day:) Nice words!
ReplyDeleteThat poem really shed light on the value of faith and something of a reminder to each of us! Thanks for that Leo Paw! :)
ReplyDeleteLovely pic.I love Simba and his dad so much! :)
Well written..:-)
ReplyDeletebeautiful piece of writing!
ReplyDeleteLovely, beautifully written. It's a ray of hope that will ignite your life and lead out step out of of the dark! :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written.You have this magic with words..
ReplyDeleteWOW!
ReplyDeleteDo you call yourself amateur eheh?
Height of humbleness sir ! :)
we all seek for hope, and its the rope that keeps us going!
Lovely !
Beautifully written poem! Let everyone have the ray of Hope :)
ReplyDeletegood expression;keep writing & smiling always :)
ReplyDeleteinfluencing ..nice piece of work
ReplyDeletelovely poem. quite motivating one too :) keep writing :)
ReplyDeleteYes we live by hope. You have a different style. I will try sometime. how to deactivate Facebook account
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